Elf They/them Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 (edited) TW: BLOOD, DARK STORY, GORE , This isn't a complete story. I just had a sudden burst of inspiration. I will get back to this but this is what I have for now. I think this can be a book. I have many ideas for it. Maybe it will be a very short book, but I think it can be one. EDIT: okay, so im deleting the prolouge i did. instead im officially making this into a book so im going to insert the file with the new prolouge and first two chapters (i promise i can spell better than this) .........docx Edited February 14, 2023 by Elf 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medium he/they Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT IS SUPER COOL. GORY AND GROSS BUT COOOOOL. ELF THAT'S LITERALLY LIKE SOME OF THE DARKEST SCUDDING STUFF I'VE EVER READ BUT I'M DIGGING IT THAT'S AWESOME.TAKE MY REPUTATION TAKE ALL OF IT. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted March 21, 2022 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 (edited) THAAAAANK YOU honestly you like it? Yay!! Ive got way more stuff planned for this If you want you can check back everyday cause I'm hoping to update everyday Edited March 21, 2022 by Elf 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morningtide she/her Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 I love this!! Good job, the writing is incredible. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoid-my-beer she/her Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 You ELFIN killed that! Honestly, that resonated in a bit of a dark way with the Freak in me, the one I’m sure I’m not alone in possessing… The one that will most likely always root for his fellow Freak, even after he turns out to be a child covered in someone else’s blood… (now I’m wondering if I should call my therapist?) Nah, just keep more coming, please! I can’t wait to see whether or not my little fellow freak will become the monster he believes he must! I neeeeeddddd to know!! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medium he/they Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 elf you have inspired me to write and post my own prologue. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Szeth's Facepalm Posted March 21, 2022 Report Share Posted March 21, 2022 The writing is just... *chefs kiss* I'm slightly confused at what happened in the story, but everyone else seems to get it, so i guess it's a me thing lol But seriously, it's so good. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted March 22, 2022 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2022 (edited) Thank you all so much for the comments! @Szeth's Facepalmthank you! And don't worry, it will be a little confusing becuase this is the start of a prologue. The prologue is not even complete yet. There's more coming! Edit: TADA! UPDATE! THE PROLOUGE IS NOW COMPLETE. CHAPTER ONE WILL BE ADDED SOON Also since the main character can't speak, what he is signing with his fingers will be written in italics and what he is thinking will be in normal script but will have single quotation marks. Edited March 22, 2022 by Elf 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medium he/they Posted March 22, 2022 Report Share Posted March 22, 2022 WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @Elf BRO BRO BRO RBOO BRO DUDUE WHAAAT THAT WAS AWESOMEE AOEUFBEAOUBEFOAHFUOFEAU HOLY CRAP THAT WAS LIKE THE COOLEST THING I'VE EVER READ YOUR STYLE IS INCREDIBLE AUHAEOFEA TAKE MY REPUTATION TAKE ALL OF IT IF YOU CAN!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Sedai she/her Posted March 22, 2022 Report Share Posted March 22, 2022 This is amazing! I loved it! Your style is great (I really got a feel for the characters, which is impressive in such a short piece) and I enjoyed it very much. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted March 22, 2022 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2022 (edited) 29 minutes ago, Doomslug The Destroyer said: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @Elf BRO BRO BRO RBOO BRO DUDUE WHAAAT THAT WAS AWESOMEE AOEUFBEAOUBEFOAHFUOFEAU HOLY CRAP THAT WAS LIKE THE COOLEST THING I'VE EVER READ YOUR STYLE IS INCREDIBLE AUHAEOFEA TAKE MY REPUTATION TAKE ALL OF IT IF YOU CAN!! THANK YOU!!!!! IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT SO MUCH AND THERE IS LOTS MORE TO COME 21 minutes ago, Robin Sedai said: This is amazing! I loved it! Your style is great (I really got a feel for the characters, which is impressive in such a short piece) and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks! All these complements are just going to further my god complex Edited March 22, 2022 by Elf 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Gregorio he/him Posted September 4, 2022 Report Share Posted September 4, 2022 Daing son. It's definitely dark and gory, but it's written well. It was kinda surprising too. Very very interesante. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted February 14, 2023 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2023 (edited) So Im officially making this into a book Ive changed quite a lot and my writing has gotten way better i hope Here's the new prolouge and the first two chapters in case anyone is interested All the previous trigger warnings apply .........docx Edited February 14, 2023 by Elf 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edema Rue she/her Posted February 14, 2023 Report Share Posted February 14, 2023 BRUH THAT WAS AMAZING 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted February 14, 2023 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2023 THANK YOU : D im already midway through writing chapter 3 so that should be up soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Szeth's Facepalm Posted February 15, 2023 Report Share Posted February 15, 2023 Hi elf :D my device still has trouble with the downloads, but i really wanna read it..... do you think you could copy and paste it into a pm? :3 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elf They/them Posted February 16, 2023 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2023 sure! what id sent you was the prolouge and chapter one of this, ill send you chapter 2 now : ) 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morningtide she/her Posted February 16, 2023 Report Share Posted February 16, 2023 OOOOH I'll read it when I have time! I'm excited! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Gregorio he/him Posted February 16, 2023 Report Share Posted February 16, 2023 Mine's having the same problem as Szeth's Facepalm. If you could send it to me too that would be awesome. I'm excited to see the changes. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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