sprint Posted September 28, 2015 Report Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) I found the "stretch forth thy hand" a bit jarring too, but the next few sentences more than made up for it. This is epic fantasy though so of course a lot of the dialogue isn't stuff that you'd use in every day conversation. What happens when Kaladin says another ideal and is granted his shardplate? "Stretch forth thy body"? I like the idea Kaladin will be walking towards someone, say the ideal as he is walking, and the plate will coalesce around him from his feet upwards. Although given the interaction with windspren we have seen when he flies it is more likely to form for the first time as he flies. Every time Lift mentions her 'awesome' I can't help cringing. Grrrr. Edited September 28, 2015 by sprint 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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