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Here’s an idea 

sonnets instead of haikus

that would be so fun

 

can you imagine?

you almost finish your post,

and then you’re ninja’d?

 

sonnets are hard work

you would have to rewrite it 

Let’s stick with haikus

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On 7/15/2024 at 10:18 AM, strmblsd said:

I dare you to read ALL  of it

Challenge accepted (I also just got back from a trip yesterday)

On 7/15/2024 at 10:34 AM, SourCandyLime said:

Do you like my writing?

Yes 😁

On 7/16/2024 at 7:33 AM, strmblsd said:

Here it is.. I don't have a name for it

 

 

When i listen to music 

 

I think about life 

 

I think about hardship 

 

I think about strife

 

Laying in my bedroom

 

Silent in the night

 

Staring at my whitewashed walls 

 

Holding my subdued pillows tight

 

So tight that they might break like me

 

Hoping nobody walks in

 

Sees me crying uncontrollably 

 

Hiding under a burdensome blanket

 

Crushing like my hopes and dreams

 

And asks if somethings wrong 

 

Im ok, im ok, im ok, 

 

I tell myself everyday

 

But deep down in my chest 

 

My heart feels a shadowy grasp

 

At home at school at work at play

 

Sitting away from the group 

 

Always on the verge of tears

 

On my friends swing alone 

 

Going back and forth like all thoughts go

 

Hoping nobody sees the broken in me

 

But through it all and ever still

 

If my friends were drowning 

 

I would lift them up and out

 

Even if it required me going under

🤯😭

*hugs*

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'VE RETURNED.

...

@strmblsd I READ IT ALL.

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