Swimmingly he/him Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 There's a building chill in the air. High in the sky to the far away place Where the wind goes to sleep every year On the edge of the void, the brink of despair, Where the Heralds might sleep with their Blades held bare. There's a pattern to the buffeting winds, Bounding like axehounds a-chase of their prey, Like the chasmfiend striking the stone. It's in the clatter and scrape of far-off claws, The Voids that tail the storm. There's a shadow above our minds. Looming silence, unseen, above unseen silence looms, Ten Deaths in the shape of the dark twisting clouds. The blackstorm we know like an old faithful friend, Its winds we can bear on our backs. The everswift tempest that sweeps red and quick, She kills with the lightning of spren. Don't anger the god who's anger unleashed, He'll take you in that storm Twist your mind dark and red, Spit you out to do horrid things. Nothing can save us. Almighty, nothing can save us. Let the storms Surge away us And leave peace in the soft drift of empty seas. 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightsworn Panda he/him Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 Jee.... You really have nothing to do with your spare time, don't you? All in all, nice poem and lyrics, by there's nothing "special" or particularly memorable in it. 8.9/10, my friend. By the way, you changed your picture (and in quite a strange way, too)! Is that your face photo-shopped onto the (poor) fish? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Joe in the Bush Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 By the way, you changed your picture (and in quite a strange way, too)! Is that your face photo-shopped onto the (poor) fish? May I direct you to this Thread? And Awesom Poem Swim. YOu don't mind me calling you Swim do you? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delightful Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 Nice For no apparent reason, the beginning rhythm reminds me of Dr. Seuss, then a little of Banjo Paterson, then just general poem-ness. Either way, very nice, and nice ketek snuck into the middle there 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketek Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 Jee.... You really have nothing to do with your spare time, don't you? He's Asian. We all know what Asians do with their spare time 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left he/him Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 I thought of Shallan killing her dad while reciting the poem. I'm not sure if that means the poem is good or not. I like the fact that you posted it though. Nerds rock. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delightful Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 @Caleb, well that just makes the whole thing a thousand times creepier..... 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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