Sunbringer
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Yeah. I should have clarified the healing a little more. It isn’t at gold compounder rating.
alloy of law spoilers
SpoilerIf he got hit with a explosion at point blank range like miles did, it would kill him.
He also has to choose to activate the healing, so it’s more like a normal blood maker, but always a constant rate, so he can’t like flare his healing to go faster.
also @Steel Inquisitive Do you mean it is a powerful weakness as in very limiting or not very applicable?
Also sorry for the extremely long backstory. I’ve been working for n this one for a while!
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This is a character I’ve been working on for a while, and I promise I came up with him before I watched captain Marvel, even if his powers are really similar.
SpoilerName: His real name is David Hill, but his nickname was Sun and his Epic name was Sun’s Wrath.
Physical Characteristics: 17 years old, but acts older. 6’ 2”, decent build, Brown hair, hazel eyes, when not in battle gear he like to wear a grey T-shirt and jeans.
Investiture: Epic. He can shoot beams of light, has enhanced strength, speed and durability (comparable to pewter) and healing. All of these must be activated on purpose.
All of his powers are reliant on sunlight. While in the sun, he absorbs it, and then can later use it a basically fuel for his abilities. While in the sun, he doesn’t have a limit on how much he can use his powers, but while indoors (without many windows) or during the night, he will drain his light reserves whenever he fires a beam of light, heals, or enhances himself.
Skills: Hand-to-hand combat expert. He also is good at cooking and is really good at ping pong.
Equipment: Heat resistant clothing (He learned the hard way that this is a good idea when you shoot lasers). Epic suit: All extremely heat resistant. Light armor with strong arm guards.
Weakness: Epic weakness: Becoming like his older brother. (Or like most epics in general.) His weakness triggers any time he tries to hurt someone that he truly thinks is innocent (he can’t lie to himself about it), kill anyone, or destroy things without any reason, and anything else of the sort. If his conscience goes against it, it triggers his weakness. He also refuses to use guns.
Family: Mother: Anna Hill (dead) Father: Jackson Hill (also dead) Older brother: Jonathan Hill/Annihilator (Epic with the power to create explosions, disintegrate anything he touches-including things like bullets-and enhanced dexterity. Also dead)
Backstory: David was born 10 years before Calamity appeared. During his childhood, he as absolutely loved being out in the sun, watching sunrises or sunsets, and eventually got the nickname Sun. When Calamity rose, his brother was one of the first to become an epic. His brother wasn’t that great a person to begin with, but he wasn’t a very bad person either. Despite his flaws, Sun idolized his brother. After he became an epic he was one of the most ruthless and vicious epics around. His brother killed his parents and hundreds of others. Sun wasn’t in his house when his brother attacked and decimated his home with an explosion, and his brother assumed he was dead. Sun ran off into the wilderness, and was taken in by a group of people who was hiding out in the mountains, though he didn’t tell them who he was. He lived among them for several years, during which time his brother ruled the city they used to live in. He occasionally went in to the town to trade for supplies, and he saw what his brother was doing. He was devastated and it became a constant fear of his that someone else he trusted would turn, or that he would. Just after his 16th birthday he was out in the woods when the sun started setting and Calamity began to rise. He was watching the sunset, and Calamity’s light seemed to grow brighter. He turned to face it, and he heard something. Offering him power. He woke up the next morning to a member of a search party from his group shaking him awake. He felt his new power coursing through him and an incredible urge to destroy. He stood, and was about to destroy the insolent mortals for waking him, but right before he was about to release his power to kill them, his power left him.
After a few months, he figured out how his weakness worked, how his powers left him as soon as he started to do things that his brother had done, hurting innocent people, killing, not caring about the destruction he caused. During those months he learned to use his powers and resist the darkness as best he could. He decided the best thing he could do for his brother was to put him down, and he went back to the city, and fought him. The battle ended with his brother defeated at his feet. Sun tried to finish his own brother, but he could not kill him, and his weakness triggered, stopping him. Their battle lasted until Annihilator had him on the ground about kill him, when Sun swept out his legs, sending him tumbling to the ground where he hit his head and was knocked out, leaving him defenseless. Sun shot him up n the head. Ever since he has refused to use a gun.
He left the city after he killed his brother and he just lived out in the mountains alone. He recently accidentally found his way to the greater cosmere, and has visited a few different worlds, and just recently came to alley city.
Guild: unaffiliated
Psyche: smart, but doesn’t like to scheme or anything. He also doesn’t have any patience for puzzles.
Personality: Friendly, but reserved. Usually optimistic, wants to assume the best in people.
Theme song: Superheroes by the script
Fighting style: his powers let him fight at a distance, but he prefers to get up close, letting him use his physical enhancement abilities, augmented by point-blank light blasts.
Edit: Since it’s an epic @Voidus
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Jacien slipped and slid through the yeti army, slashing and slicking yetis, and causing general confusion among their ranks, disrupting the front line and covering the retreat.
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1 hour ago, Dark1002 said:
And even that probably isn't enough.
X broke many of my knives, destroyed my glassweave cloak, and my tunic, destroyed one of my arm guards, and was only really affected by me blinding her with division. Fun.
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Right.
Jacien remembered the guy who had come to get him.
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Sorry I was gone for a while. @The Technovore this knight radiant could help teach you combat training, and progression works miracles for smoke inhalation!
Jacien woke up from his trance. It had started as soon as the fight had ended. It was a good thing that it hadn't happened during there fight. Or maybe the fight delayed it. Who knows?
He looked around the room, still holding a moderate amount of stormlight. He went around the room healing those that needed it, curing the damage from smoke inhalation and cuts or broken bones.
He turned toward Malu, who was pouring a very large mug of something he couldn't recognize. He did his best to avoid alcohol. He'd never had it before, but his natural ADHD would not mix well with the recklessness of being drunk.
"I might be able to do something about...That." He said, gesturing toward the smoking hole. @Invocation0 -
Send out the summary of match 3! It was super intense!
Also as a tip for everyone, when fighting a dakhor koloss, however much armor you have or how durable you think your equipment is, upgrade it.
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1 minute ago, Nohadon said:Quote
Sorry to drop this on you Sun, but here’s your first operation Job. You can teleport in here with Aon tia via Canton teleporters, if Jacien is wrapped up in a plot right now that’s fine and I’ll send another operator.
QuoteYeah, I’ve been being called to this fight for a while. Benson has one of my sleeper fabrials. I’ve been trying, but the Waiter is burning down the odd job tavern.
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Jacien was not in a good position. Freedom was in the way of him attacking full on, his armor was damaged, and he was running in stormlight. If he ran out, he would pass out.
Come on freedom. Get away from him!
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Jacien rushes over toward the bar, breaking off his charge and inhaled sharply, sucking in enough stormlight to last through an extended fight. He charged toward the waiter again.
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Ugh. Don’t worry I’ll heal freedom.
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Jacien was forced to throw himself backward off balance. He could heal her, but only if he got close, which there was no guarantee of. He sheathed his swords- they wouldn’t be useful in this close quarters- and drew a dagger. He sucked in the rest of his stormlight, enough to last him a couple more minutes, and charged again.
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“ Johnny! Get me more stormlight!”
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There are multiple ways to stab. I am stabbing in the side, not straight down. No hitting Freedom. (Insert thumbs up emoji)
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K. Thanks.
Jacien attacked furiously, charging over to the waiter, and rammed his sword into him. He did this over and over, stabbing him repeatedly. This man had come on attacking random people, and was now on top of this poor person. Any reservation he had to killing was lost on him.
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So I was busy for a bit. Could I get a recap of the fight?
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1 hour ago, Arky-boi said:
The Waiter, still burning pewter, pushed Lusk off, and avoided Jacien's blades. Then he cracked his knuckles, and ran, not towards Lusk, not towards Jacien, towards the bartender, and shoved the flaming blowtorch towards his face.
@I think I am here.@Sunbringer@InvocationAs the waiter started running from him Jacien leaped forward, grabbing for the man’s arm and activating division.
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This might not be proof, but this might help.
Mistborn 1 spoilers
SpoilerWhen Vin yanked the metalminfs out of the lord ruler, he aged forward a lot, but his arms didn’t heal. In the time it would take to age that long, it would be healed, but he didn’t.
So sorry, I don’t think that’s how it works.
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Another of Jacien's alert fabrials started flashing. He paused for just a moment, trying to decide what to do. The waiter suddenly killed someone, and Jacien felt rage boiling up in him. He instinctively sucked in a bit of stormlight and division activated, burning his handprints into the table.
He remembered when that had happened for the first time. Asking the Nightwatcher for the power to destroy those who hurt without care. People who killed without concern or mercy. People like the Skybreaker who had killed his sister.
People like this man.
Jacien sucked in stormlight, driving off his exhaustion and charged the Waiter, screaming a battle cry. He (attempted to) engaged with his swords, spinning his swords and slashing for weak points, and preferably avoiding getting hit by the blowtorch.
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Jacien walked through the door with several holes in his tunic, slightly singed hair and a bag full of dun gemstones and a couple sticks of dynamite over his shoulder. He sat down at a table, looking exhausted.
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Jacien was instructed to attack in exactly one hour. So when the defenders attacked 10 minutes before the hour, he was a little confused. He shrugged, and just attacked. He charged the distracted yeti flank, and the first one fell with two swords in its back, the second with a cut achilles tendon. He slashed, stabbed and dodged through the yeti ranks, leaving swaths of slicked ground behind him, causing yetis to slip, and then be unable to get up, then knocking my over or injuring their own allies. Confusion quickly spread through their ranks, and dozens were incapacitated in less than a minute. Most were still alive: Jacien hated to kill, even if they were attacking them. This way kept them out of the fight just as well. He would kill if he had to or if they really deserved it, but he didn’t have to right now.
A huge one stepped into his path. It roared, swinging his club at him. Jacien danced out of the way, then activated division on it, destroying half and catching the rest on fire. He ran past it as it panicked as its fur began to catch on fire also. It was sufficiently distracted, he thought.
Jacien heard Returned call for Hasharan, and spared a glance. He seemed to be fighting the biggest one of all. Well, that seemed like fun! He sprinted over, dodging between several Yetis and having to slick himself to escape another large one’s grasp. He stabbed one, then used it as something to jump off of, then leaped off, stabbing both swords into the enormous yetis hairy back.
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Auri grew up a wall nearby Returned and the others and made herself visible to all of them.
“Hello. How are you? My name’s Auri, I’m Jacien’s spren. Umm, so he was wondering what he should do.”
That sounded like the way humans talked, right? She should probably talk to people other than Jacien more often. And if she was being honest with herself, he probably was to eccentric to be a good model for human conversation.
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I am confused. A long conversation? What does this mean.
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Jacien looked out of a small thicket a short distance from the Yeti camp. He had not actually been at fortress eternal when this siege had started, but had come as soon as he had heard. He didn't know what he was going to do to help, but he knew he had to do something.
He turned toward Auri. "Auri, can you sneak past the Yeti lines and find returned for me? Ask him what I can do to help."
He watched as Auri sped off toward the fortress and climb the walls.
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Alleyverse Character Discussion
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Yeah. I did that on purpose. As element of chaos has pointed out, he is a rather powerful epic, but I didn’t want him to be strictly non-combative, so I gave him an extremely limiting weakness to balance it out.