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  1. I wrote this poem about a week ago and I'd like to share it and get some feedback on it if anyone wishes to give some. 

    To help

    Spoiler

    I know you want to help, my child

    And I'm not here to stop you 

    Just to merely warn of the dangers ahead

    You've chosen a noble path

    A great one 

    A path I once walked

    One I still walk

    For once you've walked it

    You can't ever stop 

     

    Sorry if this makes the path unwanted 

    That's not what I'm trying 

    I'm just letting you know

    That if you want to comfort

    The brokenhearted 

    The downtrodden

    Those huddling in the corners during lunches

    Those who have very visibly been hurt

    And those who are hurting on the inside

    From all types and sorts of sources

     

    I know you wish to help

    And as far as I can tell

    This is the path

    Not a lonely one

    For you don’t have to tread it alone

     

    You wish to heal their hurts

    To calm their trembling broken hearts

    To help pick up the pieces of their shattered lives

    You want to help us?

    Then you must ask and join us

     

    I know your desire burns deep

    But this will require more than you can know

    Because to comfort the lonely and broken

    You must join us

    And walk and be shattered to know

     

    I'm sorry it's the only way

    But I won't give you a lesser way

    To help them

    Because once you've cried for nights on end

    And had sleepless nights

    Worrying

    And wishing to help

    And to die at the same time 

     

    You'll have to reach deeper than before 

    And I'm sorry my child

    For I know the pain

    And it's the best way to help them

    Is to feel their pain

    And to guide them through the dark

    To even greater happiness than they've ever known

    And you've ever known 

    And I know how it will make you feel

    I know

    Know that you're strong

    And that you can reach out to them when you need to lean on them

    And know that I love you, my child

    Now go and ask

    And help them

    And yourself 

    Along the way

     

     

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    2. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Too much and you'll fall apart, and you can't lift anyone when you can't even stand. It's a dangerous line to walk, which I think the poem sort of mentioned but not very much.

    3. shortcake

      shortcake

      I think it's beautiful, Wizzy! <3

    4. Wittles

      Wittles

      I like that a lot. Good job Wiz! Your poetry's just always cool

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