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I stand before the mirror
My face a mask of joy
Eyes twinkling, lips upturned
But inside, a different emotion deployed
The corners of my mouth stretch wide
In a gesture that's automatic, not sincere
A facade of happiness that I must hide
From the world that would mock or sneer
I stand here grinning
Lost in my own confusion
Trying to find my way through
This life that's filled with illusion
So I stand before the mirror
Searching for my true self
Hoping to find the courage
To break free from this stealth
I long to be authentic
To live my life with ease
To smile from the inside out
And find the joy that never cease
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That's so beautiful! It's essentially everything I want out of life.
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I think I'll hang up my writer's pen as you have written authentically powerful stuff indeed.
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Weow. Just weow *enthusiastic Telrao noises*
I really like the structure, the rhythm, and how you paced the stanzas - the way it moves through the description, delving into emotions... The way you highlighted certain words with rhyme...
Profound and deep - excelente, amigo!
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