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Okay, um.
I wrote a song. It’s called Let Me In.
And it’s really bad, and I haven’t recorded anything, and I know the melody in my head but I cannot sing for the life of me so I’m trying to persuade my friend who can sing to do it, but she insists she can’t sing even though she can sooooo it’s a work in progress.
Against my better judgement, I’m posting it here. Could y’all maybe… y’know… tell me where the storming awful bits and the slightly less storming awful bits are? Maybe? Thanks!!
*deep breath*
SpoilerLet Me In
[verse 1]
Saw you crying on your own today
Walked up and asked ‘are you alright’
I wish it didn’t have to be this way
The tears, the reassurances you’re fine
[verse 2]
Looked at my phone today
One unread message from you
‘Can’t meet up, but I swear I’m okay’
Don’t believe you for a second, but what can I do, what can I do?
[pre-chorus]
You say you’re trying to stop me from worrying
Its not working
I swear there’s nothing worse than not knowing
When I could be helping
[chorus]
Your fake smiles make me cry
So I wish upon a star
Tomorrow you’ll tell me everything
And I’ll help heal your scars
We all need secrets, but I see
How bad you’re struggling
All I want is to hold you and say it’s okay
If you’ll only let me in.
[verse 3]
Knocked on your door this morning
Asked ‘do you want to go and hang out’
Just like the old days, but there’s a new day dawning
A day where all you do is shut me out, out, out
[pre-chorus]
[chorus]
[instrumental]
The anxiety is building and I’m walking on a thin sheet of ice
But I can’t stop the empty promises that its gonna be alright
And the stress, and the problems, they’re crushing me, crushing us
[chorus x2]
I swear there’s nothing worse than this not knowing
Why won’t you let me in?
What do you think? *nervously pushes forward*
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QuoteAnd it’s really bad, and I haven’t recorded anything, and I know the melody in my head but I cannot sing for the life of me so I’m trying to persuade my friend who can sing to do it, but she insists she can’t sing even though she can sooooo it’s a work in progress.
If your friend is being too stubborn, I could maybe give it a shot *supershy shruggie*
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if you’re sure it’s okay, and you have time, and you’re happy to and everything…
I would love that
I can record me playing the melody on flute and post it somewhere, probably my art thread since music is art right(?), but realistically that’s probably not going to happen until Monday. (yay homework. everyone’s favourite. and the fact that I have to learn 2 entire symphonies in a week but that’s a different story entirely.)
So ya, thank you so scudding much for offering :DD
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if you’re sure it’s okay, and you have time, and you’re happy to and everything…
I would love that
I can record me playing the melody on flute and post it somewhere, probably my art thread since music is art right(?), but realistically that’s probably not going to happen until Monday. (yay homework. everyone’s favourite. and the fact that I have to learn 2 entire symphonies in a week but that’s a different story entirely.)
So ya, thank you so scudding much for offering :DD
Wow that sounds fun xD We do all love homework
Of course! You can also PM me it if you like.