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If I was kinderIf I was a better friendIf I was smallerIf I wasn’t so messed upIf people weren’t so meanIf I loved betterWorked harderWas stronger…If I was tougherIf I was smarterIf I cared moreIf I was a better studentIf I was good enoughIf I wasn’t so aloneIf I could write to inspireInstead of tear downIf I wasn’t so depressedIf I could focus betterIf I was less clingyIf I didn’t hurt peopleIf I didn’t hurt myselfIf I was closer to peopleIf I had fewer scarsIf I was less distantIf I wasn’t abandonedIf I didn’t drive people awayIf I wasn’t such a mistakeIf things were betterIf I was betterIf I was differentIf I wasn’t a failureIf I didn’t have so much to hideIf I didn’t mess upIf I had less traumaIf I was more passionateIf I could change the worldIf I could face my fearsInstead of being the cowardIf I could accept a complimentIf I could be humbleIf I could trustIf I was braveIf I was prettierIf I could finish what I startedIf I was good enough forSomeone special to love meIf I was innocentIf I was trustworthyIf I wasn’t such a traitorIf I was a better artistIf I had musical talentIf I was more averageAnd less“Special”If I wasn’t so bigIf I was more carefulIf I could control myself…If I could beThat which I seeIn everyone elseBut me.~ Stick 5-28-24- Show previous comments 1 more
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I meant (in a joking way, but also kinda seriously) that in your poem, you've put down thoughts I've been dealing with too, so accurately that it feels almost uncomfortable.
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Yeah, that happens